5 basic elements-
slug line, action, character name, dialogue, parentheticals
slug line, int/ext add location and time of scene
action- writing description of scene, always write in present tense. First time introduced, name is capitalized set the feel of the scene. action words or emphasized description words are capitalized as they are very important.
character name includes a basic description
dialogue text is centered includes how the character talks
parentheticals- further centered basic descriptions of what is happening. describes the scene and how everything is occuring in the scene.
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One thing i see is that the girls shadow is cut off in the fourth from the left. She is also just standing still, with very little creativ...
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